I got some great feedback from my mentor recently. She's still not one
for doling out praise, but I could tell that she liked my new work (and
annotations--thanksMISers !) much better than my last.
I still have a lot of character development to do. That's one thing I find hard about writing a new story every month--I feel like there's just not enough time to
get to know the character. I guess that's what revision is for.
My mentor also said something that I imagine an astute shrink could also
say about me: "You tend to beat around the bush at dramatic moments."
Yup. That's me. Crouching under the bed to avoid emotionally difficult