tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post7273769707118577368..comments2023-11-03T05:14:20.044-04:00Comments on Writer Bug: Lesson #3: How to reviseWriter Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18332064105213167179noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-15090831445924219752007-07-31T20:02:00.000-04:002007-07-31T20:02:00.000-04:00Does anyone have the list and are you willing to f...Does anyone have the list and are you willing to fax it to me I lost mine. TITIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404607872558389013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-86750888478190002882007-07-26T21:12:00.000-04:002007-07-26T21:12:00.000-04:00I tried circling verbs and bailed after one page. ...I tried circling verbs and bailed after one page. I"m revising right now and I haven't tried anything else -- thanks for the reminder. I should take out the list and see what "pass" might help.TIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404607872558389013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-28535129978680768602007-07-23T14:50:00.000-04:002007-07-23T14:50:00.000-04:00LOL Repeater. I think what AJ forgot to mention wa...LOL Repeater. I think what AJ forgot to mention was that it's fairly impossible to revise a piece until you've had some time away from it! You should now blog about what you're working on! Go! :)Writer Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18332064105213167179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-77871672029618360762007-07-22T20:11:00.000-04:002007-07-22T20:11:00.000-04:00Ah, yes, thanks for the reminder. Of course, I hav...Ah, yes, thanks for the reminder. Of course, I haven't even gotten to the point where I can do any "passes". I started out circling verbs, panicked & started looking at my 8 letter words, tried to change from 1st to 3rd person & then decided I needed to cut out more than 1/2 the story. Now I've got 1 new scene written. I could make a list of how NOT to revise a story!Repeaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05958922007263367129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-2770619475335654192007-07-20T14:05:00.000-04:002007-07-20T14:05:00.000-04:00Bug, thanks so much, this is just what I needed. I...Bug, thanks so much, this is just what I needed. I have a story and a novel to revise, and I've been putting it off because it seemed like such a huge task and I had no idea where or how to begin ~ now, I do!Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.com