tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post115766323200089351..comments2023-11-03T05:14:20.044-04:00Comments on Writer Bug: In my character's voice, part 1Writer Bughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18332064105213167179noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30540321.post-1157729405351831952006-09-08T11:30:00.000-04:002006-09-08T11:30:00.000-04:00Having the character mention right away that she's...Having the character mention right away that she's from the South and still has a southern accent really worked. I automatically read the words with a twang, which made her sound believable. Loved hearing her thoughts on getting naked. <BR/><BR/>Here's a suggestion--consider creating a short scene with some dialogue between her and the person parked in the car. For example, does the person jump out of the car the minute your main character arrives and then try to follow her inside the shelter? It might be interesting (and revealing) to see how your main character shuts this person out since she wants her time alone with the dogs (and it would show your character's chutzpah).<BR/><BR/>Just my two cents. :)Idiot Cookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11865748428499401466noreply@blogger.com